Six Sentence Sunday – o3.18.12

This continues on from last week.

They both watched as she stretched to reach a bottle of Jack on the high shelf, her pale flat stomach creeping its way out of her tank top. Her black cargo pants hung very low on her hips; her navel was pierced, and the curvy tails of black tribal designs stuck out on each side of her front, leading down to where Jake and Vaughn wished they could see the rest.

Jake and Vaughn both breathed in her scent as she passed by,it was enough to drive them into bloodlust. They could easily leap over the bar, grab her, and drain her of her blood before anyone could stop them – the murderous creatures they were begged to be let out.

She walked over to them, “Hey guys, sorry about the wait. What can I get you?”

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Also, I finally posted a summary/pitch of my novel if you are interested in knowing about it. Novel Pitch



  1. Nice, sensual description of the woman. I could def. picture her. I’ll leave the smelling to the vamps. LOL

  2. Love her complete lack of suspicion about their motives. Nice description of her and great set up!

    p.s. Sorry I’m late reading. Couldn’t find link to your Six Sunday. Great six, Siren!

    • This is part of my novel. Then I started writing this fantasy scene in it where Armani is introduced and just took off with it. Still trying to figure out what to do with it. I have to write it until it ends and get it out of my system, then I return to finishing the novel above.

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